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<Chadwick>
Posted
I wrote this a few years ago for someone I had a recurrent online flirtation with.

I thought I may as well share it.
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It was a hot summer afternoon on a quiet and lonely beach in southern Italy. The small, pretty Asian girl had been walking down the shore for what felt like hours. While she usually enjoyed showing her body at public beaches, and she definitely enjoyed watching other people's bodies, on that day, she was in the mood for quiet privacy.

Finally she found a place that satisfied her. The sand was beautiful, the water was deep blue, and the nearby trees protected the area from random eyes. She carefully set up her lounge chair, draped her towel over it, unhooked her bikini top, stepped out of her bottoms and settled in for the afternoon.

The sun roasted her naked body and before long her eyes grew heavy and she drifted off to sleep.

She awoke a short time later... she sensed something. A young, light-skinned man stood only a few yards away. It looked like he had just arrived; his back was to her as he gazed out across the ocean. He didn't seem to have noticed her.

Her eyes moved over his body: he was tall, and muscular... and naked. His body was well tanned, except for a white strip where his briefs usually went. He turned, as if to walk further down the beach, nearer to the girl. Then he paused.

She nearly gasped aloud at the sight of his cock, dangling between his legs. It wasn't massive, but even from where she lay, she saw that it was beautiful and well proportioned.

Her hand drifted caressed her stomach and drifted between her legs. She absent-mindedly stroked her pussy while she watched him. She nearly groaned with disappointment when he turned back toward the ocean. But then his own hand moved to his own genitals. She watched as he slowly stroked his cock... even though she couldn't actually see his hand or penis, there was no doubt in her mind about what he was doing.

Her legs spread further as she continued playing with herself. It felt almost unreal... the sun, the beach... the pretty naked boy.

"mmmmmm..." she moaned. The young man's hand froze and he turned with alarm. His worried face quickly softened when he realized what was happening.

They stared at each other for several moments. Her fingers were still in her pussy; his hand was still on his stiff, tall cock.

"Come here, baby," she whispered. He nodded and stepped closer. His eyes roamed over her naked, spread eagled body hungrily. Finally they landed on her pussy as he advanced and dropped to his knees. His buried his face between her legs, first running his tongue down from her navel to the base of her pussy, her juices covered his face, and he loved it. His tongue entered her, then moved up and circled her clit, while his fingers played with her pussy lips.

She grabbed his shoulder with one hand and clutched his hair with the other. "God, yes!" she moaned as her hips bucked into him.

She pulled him up, and they kissed. She loved tasting herself on men. As their tongues played, her hand moved to his cock. It had softened some while he ate her, but it quickly grew at her touch.

"I didn't expect... I don't have anything..." He whispered.

"Don't worry baby," she sat up and reached for her purse. A moment later she removed a condom wrapper and tore it open. He watched her closely, stroking his own cock occasionally. She pulled the condom down over his penis. "You're so hot, baby," she cooed. She played with his balls, grasped his cock, leaned back and guided him down over her. He eased his cock into her snug, wet pussy and she gasped.

He moved in and out of her smoothly, evenly; their groove was smooth and natural. She wrapped her legs around him, he held her hands and stared deep into her brown eyes.

As they screwed, he moved his face down to her small erect nipples, took one in his mouth and sucked firmly. She gasped and clutched at his body... "GOD...! YES...!" as a wave after wave of pleasure started rolling through her body.

He released her nipple and thrust firmly into her. His movements became firm, slow and deliberate... then quickened...his eyes glazed over and he gasped as his came inside her.

Obviously exhausted he rested inside of her for a long soft moment before removing himself from her, tossing the condom to the side and nestling in beside her on the sturdy lounge chair.
 
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<striptease4u01>
Posted
Dear Chadwick,

I think that your story has great otential although if you are open for surgestions heres a few:

1) dont use the word screwed, it ruines the mood in my opinion.

2) Dont end the story there. I think that you might be on to something and then you should continue it.

I think that you could write your very own sex novel and very well at that.

I enjoyed your story it was believeable and realistic, it could happen

something to think about
 
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